The story would have been Okay, but at the ML's first appearance, he was a mannerless pig who insulted the FL in public at a party at her own house when he was there to make a business deal with her father. "Hey Dude! I just called your daughter a spoiled brat of a useless slut. Now, how about you award me a nice fat contract so I can make lots of money?" If this sounds really stupid to you, it sounded that way to me also.
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