I liked the FL and the ML, although they were both kind of dense, but his father was from Mars! "I've been an OCD total jerk all my life and alienated everyone including my son, but I love him and am proud of him. I keep criticizing him and pushing him away, but I want the best for him, so I'll come up with this unbelievably tortuous plot in which a billion things could go wrong and ruin everything, just to make him ultimately happy." If this sounds ridiculous, I thought so too.
Honeymoon Baby