Not a bad story at all. However, if I was the doctor, I probably would have used a scalpel on the two traffickers in a way that would have left, shall we say, a permanent impression. Since this is England, human traffickers, murderers, and rapists receive a slap on the wrist while someone who swipes a cigarette goes to jail for 18 years (true story). I'm afraid that I can't play that way, having been brought up with at least a modicum of common sense and a belief in justice and fairness.
A Family For His Tiny Twins