i did not expect any traction with this hUH- y’all were just waiting weren’t you ⑉ႣỏႣ⑉ firstly thank you for all of your advice !!! i’ve been writing on and off for like my entire childhood and adulthood but since i’m very creative i just never finish any of them,,, secondly i do already have the main character n family all though...... reply
There is so much advice what I could you give you, but I try to be brief.
If you are serious about writing a novel, you should read some books on creative writing, it’s the must (or if you have higher ambitions, you should read books on narratology and theory of literature). I’m sure Asian authors of internet culture don’t read these books, s...... reply
Imo.
- Appearance wise, i never saw green eyed mls they’re mostly gold, red, or blue. So id like green eyes bished be sleeping on emeralds.
- still simp but slightly sick of the ml who won some war from another kingdom and now the whole country is scared of him then suddenly there’s this reincarnated person who’s not like other girls. IM SIC...... reply
Ok...So this will be just what I want to see in a story. Ps don’t mind my spelling mistakes, I’m not double checking this long-ass paragraph that I wrote. I wouldn’t want to read things like... You must die before you get to leave me and stuff. Like I want to see a healthy relationship where both parties can end the relationship whenever they...... reply
Hmmmm I have also read a shit tone of villainess reincarnation stories that I’m honestly surprised at myself for not losing interest in them lol but here r some things that I generally like/dislike with a lot of them:
-evil (step) sister or best friend has gotten so old. It’s to the point where I basically ride off all her friends/siblings as ...... reply
dont add too much bitchy side antagonists. they get boring and repetitive fast yk?
make sure you have the main problem written down in the beginning and dont let the sub-plots/issue overshadow it. shit can get annoying when authors dont have a main objective in mind or stray off of it while writing in general.
also stay away from clichés and try...... reply
It's your story and your choice, of course. But I'd avoid the usual falling in love at first sight, the blushing and weak maiden, the 'I fell in love with the man who killed me in my past life', toxic relationships or portraying any bad relationship dynamics in a good/romantic way, the 'I'm a villainess but I'll kill you with kindness', the 'wait f...... reply
don't make their murderer the ml. Excuses don't matter, redemption is okay ig. ML doesn't always have to be prince, part of the royal family, duke or archduke, ML doesn't need to have black hair and have abs, and finally no over bearing CEO lines.
just my thoughts reply
well i think this goes without saying but there obviously shouldnt be a toxic relationship, and if you do want to add that don't romanticize it and the same goes with rape, pedophilia, etc i mean as a story plot points its fine as long as it isnt romanticzed reply
okay okay listen i’ve read so many villainess reincarnation that i mine as well be an expert of this genre but most of the one’s i read become stale after a while, be it prolonging an obvious outcome, copious amounts of misunderstandings or just the story dragging on for no reason,,, WELL i had the brilliant idea to make my own villainess reincarnation novel but i want some type of feedback or at least like a “here’s what not to do” type of list ya know, i’m already good to go on those misunderstandings bc it doesn’t provide the story with anything except a headache,,, i’d really appreciate any do’s and don’t’s you guys have-
