I feel like the world could use a bit more fleshing out and the conflict needs revision. This isn't going to be an essay more like disjointed thoughts of things that didn't make sense to me. I'm pretty hammered right now so I'll probably delete this tomorrow morning.
World Building
So, did the people just buckle over when Melantha entered the thr...... 2 reply
I am a gay man and personally I don't mind fetishization cause I could care less what other people do/think or whatever. But I still think its not the best thing. Anyways I think what needs to be talked about more is why is rape such a prominent theme in BL. (I don't know how to word this next part without it sounding strange but I'll try) What's e...... reply