First Feeling Reading Yaoi

i've been working on a powerpoint for my english class and i've chose to do mine on junji ito. can i get some opinions? i just want to know if the slide show makes sense. i'm not done doing the notes at the bottom tho.

here's the link https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1S3wgA8TAJ7H1YEeyc65QuPU5Tfsk9kZiZXP5fnLN6I4/edit?usp=sharing

Content Warning tho

the assignment is to present an artist and their art. i chose junji ito and uzumaki. the main subject of my presentation is how junji ito scares us using his story-telling and artstyle.