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killua is loser and Zoro is ugly
Okay for starters i do not think killua is a loser nor do i think that zoro is ugly like i would've to be dumb to think that, i love both of them but i needed your attention sorry .
Sooo I just came out with the first chapter of a book I have been working on it called "the all seeing eyes"
What would you do if you found a boy covered in bruises on you're doorstep? Would you ask him if he's okay? Or would you ask him where his parents are? Or maybe even call you're neighbor? Well I did none of these and i'm damn glad I didn't.
Abigail was you're normal office worker with a bit of a temper but that all changed when she found a boy on her doorstep.
So if you're interested check it out.
Again sorry if any of you are still offended by the statement I made earlier i did not mean it .
Grammar. Punctuation. Capitals and names.
Consistency with italics.
The plot starts nicely but your execution of written language is in need of a proof reader with a solid knowledge of written English. Sadly the grammatical errors makes reading awkward.
Constructive criticism only here. Again, the plot seems interesting reply
