smut practice for writing
as we all know, mangago is the accursed site where we write (and read). i decided to practice writing smut (since i write and this is my first time writing smut). advice and feedback appreciated. i'm only gon write a lil bit so here goes (no penetration). . .
WARNINGS-
KINKS: CHOKING/BREATH PLAY, SLIGHT BREEDING/IMPRENATION, PRAISE, SLIGHT D/S (DOM-SUB elements)
ALSO: MFM
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"Hm?" Elias quirked an eyebrow teasingly while making the closed mouth sound, "What is it you want?"
Felix whined, finding it harder than usual to express her desires without the breath she usually had. "I wa-"
"I think she wants us to touch her," Leo cut her off, smirking subtly. Ah, he's teasing me, Felix thought. "But then again, I could be wrong~. Is that what you want, baby?"
She parted her lips halfway before closing them back, huffing through her nose but immediately regretting it as it was already hard enough to get air in. "Brea- ca- can- bre"
Elias's face no longer held its same amusement as before, now it shifted into something darker - as his eyes almost looked bored. "Beg for it, then. Beg for your air."
Though it'd been hard to breathe with Elias's hands clasped around her neck, almost as if she'd just truly noticed how hard it was - her labored breathing increased tenfold. "Brea- pl-please - can't-"
Felix cut her incomplete pleading off, trying to gather enough air to finish it as it seemed like he was squeezing harder - though he wasn't.
"You can do better than that," Elias looked at her plainly, Leo watching them stoically. "You must not really want your air that much."
The submissive knew her safeword and she trusted the doms in her presence, but a new wave of panic wove itself into her gut as she started coughing - finding just enough air to beg properly. "Please- air, I- breathe air. I was- goo- girl, please."
Elias's face relaxed into a sweet and soft smile, "And?"
"Sir. Breat- sir. Can I breathe, sir?" She forced out with the little air supply she'd salvaged, causing Elias's face to break into a grin.
He eased up on the pressure, hands still on her neck as he soothed the skin which had been gripped tightly. Felix sucked in big amounts of air as she sat up abruptly. "Good girl, you did so good," Elias cooed.
Leo stood from the chair he'd been watching the spectacle from, striding over to the pair. "And you know what good girls get?"
Felix peered up at Leo through tear-filled eyes as he took her chin between his index and thumb finger. Noticing the movement, Leo loosened his grip to allow her to nod her head.
"What?" His rough and jagged voice interrogated.
Elias huffed in amusement, knowing how it would play out - he always did.
"I- egh," Leo shoved his index and middle finger into her mouth the second she opened it to respond.
"Suck."
Obeying the dom's command, she licked on it - even threading her tongue between his two fingers. "Did you keep the plug in like I told you?" He sternly inquired yet with his voice and dominant tone, it managed to come out like he already knew she didn't - scolding her.
"Yesh, mashter."
Leo ran a hand through his ink-black curls, similar to the aura he gave off. "Good. What do you want as your reward?" He smirked and it made Felix almost as breathless as Elias did when his hands were wrapped around her throat.
She pull away from Leo's fingers and looked down as she flushed in embarrassment, nearly whispering. "Yo- your cum in. . . here." Felix gestured to her lower stomach.
The dom in front of her harshly gripped her hair, drawing a wince from Felix. "I didn't tell you to stop sucking and do you really want your reward?"
The dark teasing lilt in his voice gave away that he wasn't really considering taking her reward away, he just couldn't hear her. "Can I have your cum, in here. . . master?" She added as an afterthought.
Leo sighed like her request was a chore. "Well, you've been a good girl. So I guess you worked hard."
He yanked her head back so she'd stare up, her eyes trailed the skull tattoo on his strong forearm that never ceased to hitch her breath. Leo looked her in her eyes, darkly - while Elias smirked next to Leo.
Leo tugged at his leather black belt, unbuttoning his slacks. "Good girls get bred, right?" He turned to Elias, asking him what he thought.
"Yeah." Elias stood from the seat he'd taken, walking over to the bed.
"Good girls get bred."
