Cringe nicknames. Authors have a thing for characters calling their partner nicknames that aren't your usual nicknames and honestly it just sounds cringe.
example "baby doll" EUGHHHHHHHH 2 reply
The reader who you're supposed to self insert into is very obviously white. No this man can't run his finger through my hair, he wouldn't even be allowed to touch my hair shit is a bitch to style and maintain and i don't even have that curly of a hair texture 2 reply
the blatant use of AI... i don't get why someone would bother promoting boring chatgpt slop as their own work, but even if u do, at least *try* hiding the fact that u used it. i lowkey get triggered just seeing the em dash now 1 reply
please please please use paragraph breaks, i physically am incapable of reading fanfics which are just huge paras without gap, as a fanfic writer myself, its not that hard trust 2 reply
When they make the mc "loving, kind, genuine, dosn't hold grudges, pure and whatever" I mean stfu someone killed your parent and you forgave them cause you're supposedly a better human aaaaggggggggggghhhhhhh reply
They always use a descriptor like their hair color instead of just writing a pronoun or their name. And specifically for hair color, half of fictional characters have weird hair colors there are no word for so they just make one up! Do you really think "He walked to the door" sounds worse than "The blue-nette walked out the door"? It doesn't, and i...... 2 reply
Besides the general icks like bad grammar, no paragraph breaks, way too short chapters, fanfiction authors abandoning their works, or the classic "guys sorry I haven't updated in a while, I got arrested for planing a coup against the government and have just broken out of prison", I hate it when the character is written way too ooc, like i understa...... 2 reply
I'm a shit writer too so I understand its hard to write BUT,
When someone is so mischaracterisated that you wonder what media the author consumed to write them so badly 1 reply