Comments of Adeiro Netsu Shisen

I'll be honest, I really love the work of Yuma Sotaru. A fantastic work once again, very humorous as usual. I loved reading it, though the plot may seem odd to others. I found it an interesting read, though this is from someone who has been scanning the entire collection of yaoi manga slowly from A to Z in order to find some really good ones.

escalated quickly. no real plot

its ok I'm not saying its bad but it could have been longer and also i am not a big fan of the art

Cute story! (^○^)

pretty good for a oneshot

It's too short ..I wish there was more

I would like to have more chapter it ended to fast. They were still having sex come on give me the aftergow :( ut then again couldn't do anything about it. It was really cute and nice tho

DONE READING Oneshot hope its a little longer

Mmm, now THIS is yaoi as it should be. Cute blonde uke, brooding dark seme, unwavering top/bottom (one pole x one hole,) the uke's ass is the sexual focal point (the dick is a cosmetic afterthought to indicate his level of desire for buttsex) and that is a SEXY paintbrush insertion. Cowgirl position on the last page is nice too. Only thing that would have made it better is if the seme had molested the uke's nipples.

Aaaahh ... this is very, very sweet ! Oddly romantic, and a great read !

How about... NO?!

Why did it end so early.. it was a little time that i could just take breath, damn...

story that have a lot of potential, it was short lived but its really wholesome in a way

For a one shot this was pretty good

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One of the first mangas i read that i found simple and cute. The semes horny face was weird though.

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