Comments of Ai ga Kami wo Korosu Toki

Lost interest

i want more of the first story…it kinda rushed to the end that wasn’t satisfyingly at all…but overall still good

Had a good start but then, the ending feels unfinished. Also hate the 2nd story. He literally rape the uke. And then the uke just forgive him just bcs he know that he loved for a long time, meh :/ just bcs you like a person, doesnt mean it justified you raping them

TAGS: yakuza seme, older seme x younger uke

plot - 3.5/5
the romance of vintage mangas hit kinda different. love the premise of seme who was in love with uke's mom and so when he met uke he saw the resemblence and it took him in. this is old manga so their romance progressed super fast lol its just that the climax felt unresolved. they were so romantic tho.......age gap daddy seme x younger uke so sexc

art - 5/5
i love.......vintage manga art style...... the author drew the romantic panels so well

smut - 5/5
LISTEN THE DICKS WERENT SEEN IT WASNT EXPLICIT BUT HEAR ME OUT,........THEY WERENT HAVING SEX, THEY MADE LOVE

simp seme meter - :)/5
this isnt yandere you all fucking lied to me :)))))))

enjoyment - 4/5
it was short and lovely, the yakuza setting made it refreshing to read too

overall: 4.3/5

Mafia man (seme) x student (uke)
My rating: 7,5/10
It feels like reading a Wattpad story, the plot is corny, predictable and unrealistic. But the art makes me feel like this is deep, I love the style. In addition, the seme is a gentleman and a mobster, I can't not like him. The uke is dumb and acts like he believes in fanfic. It doesn't seem to be complete.

MAFIA, DRAMA, AGE GAP (15 years), NAIVE UKE, FINANCIAL GAP
On his trip to New York City, college student Takeru gets lost in the wrong part of town. He gets attacked, but is rescued by a man named Rei. Touched by Rei's kindness, Takeru can't help being attracted to him. But then Takeru discovers that Rei is the second-highest-ranking mafia man in New York City. Can love overcome such odds?

SPOILER:
The seme initially approached him because he suspected him to be the secret son of his boss who was gonna pass away soon AND because he resebles his mother, the seme's FIRST LOVE (ungh). But then he realises the uke is more than a substitute and even though he confirms him to be the real son, he keeps him in the dark in order to protect him and instead enters a secret relationship with him.

ONESHOT (SPOILER):
Again, the art is what makes it good. The plot is crappy and the seme is a horrible bully. He harassed him until graduation and now wants to force the uke to work with him at the hospital. And then he rapes him?! Great, just go! And I hate that he could "redeem himself" by saving the uke's father's life. What the hell, that's not how it works! The uke finding this cringy note revealing the seme's love for him is just the cherry on top. Haaaah ... my guy, u should've run far far away. It's not like u have to stay in this place.

Only the first story is goated

The first story really landed on the emotional aspect with some convenient plot elements, and I like the second story, but could've done without the rape scene and instead should've opted to make it a two parter with the charm being the prop that brings them together ultimately. Would've been a lot sexier.

If you are reading this comment your parents will die within 5 years. To undo this curse you need to copy this and paste it on 5 other manga. i'm so sorry

Hard to get through, which is weird since it's so fast paced and only 3 chapters. The uke did something really stupid, if he wasn't a lead in this story he would have died at the end of the first chapter.
At least the art and the love scenes were good.

Ch 4 has the seme sexually assault the uke after years of emotional bullying. I don't know if it's meant to be a oneshot, but I do wish there was more of it.

Feel in love to quickly, not realy that intressting but okey for a short story.

ok the different story last chapter caught me off guard

boring but good okay

this was shit