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Its nice and all but I hope they tone it down with Cain sister. She kinda getting more annoying. Why cant they just focused on the adventure of him and the kids? Its why ppl read it in the first place, why have to add something that would ruin the joy. And I hate how she is so obsessed borderline yandere, ugh :/
Oh and I comment about the mom before but it got deleted. There's no excuses for the mom. She's terrible and that's the fact. What she did to him is shitty.
Well, I won't talk about the story too much since its a bit problematic lol. The seme is really arrogant and he truly looked down on the Haeso, but then wondering why he draws the line lol. The power dynamic here are also really obvious. The seme truly an ass and keep belitling Haeso just because he always had the upper hand, and Haeso gave in so easily. I truly hope he made him suffer more. The switch of him after realizing he likes him is kinda... sudden? In my opinion the seme need to have more hard time after everything he said to Haeso.
One thing I appreciate here, one, they do actually communicate which is nice.
Second, I like the art. I like and appreciate how the artist didn't draw Haeso as thin and have the smallest waist. And also, the whole body bending too ifykyk. I like seeing a healthy mans body here (I'm not talking about beefy uke) usually they really make the smaller uke body looks way too small (they twinkyfy them too much T_T). So its nice to see a proper waist here.