Oh My God!!! It is soooo sexy!!! I want more!!! And I don't know why but I didn't like Hiroi. If there is going to be a couple, I would prefer Take & Mine :)
Polyamorous relationship aren't a problem as long as all parties are healthy and communicative... and their relationship was one of the unhealthiest ones I've read. It was strung by manipulation and jealousy. Dangerous factors. The sex scenes would have been more enjoyable if Mine wasn't controlled by Hiroi's selfishness and Take's forcefulness.
Ok i have a shit ton of comments/issues. Am I a bitch for wanted hiroi to be completely out of the picture? I see amazing potential between take and mine. S & M!!!!! Also,hiroi just annoys me. Why? Hell if I know. He's just irksome and im not into love triangles anyway. -_- Love triangles! (see above) Ugh they suck. They differ from a threesome. Why? Well a three some is some sexy ass shit. A love triangle consists of individual parties feeling conflicted with their feelings. (Within a threesome, I don't give two shits about their feelings)-_- Also, I always want to cut one out.(Hiroi) three's a crowd. -_- Anywho, does anyone else feel like this or similar. I'm very conflicted because this story was very good, but my wacky ass preferences just do not support 5 stars.
Hopefully I'm not the only weirdo out there that thinks like this. ^^
Deep down we all know that this is really fucked up. BUT I CAN'T HELP IT I STILL LIKE IT. It's so bad that one HAVE TO love it, probably the only threesome i ever liked. But I'd really appreciate another ending.
One of a kind love story. Must-read. Beautiful, curious and 100% smexy. While the plot may seem out of this world and immature, the emotions and the psychological way things turn out will absolutely grab you. There are a lot of sensible WHY's and HOW's. The fact that Mine loved Hiroi too much to allow Hiroi to change him, even going through lengths of accepting Take who he didnt like, but because Hiroi said that Take is a part of him, Mine decided to accept all of Hiroi. While not losing the love he had for Hiroi which stemmed from the latter's acceptance and finding out Mine's real character. Meanwhile, Take, who seemed like the strong character, is wavering. His actions contradicting his words and thoughts. Personally, I want to ask the author, want her to continue the story. Why is Take starting to fall for Mine? Because Mine doesnt like him but puts up with him for Hiroi? Then if by chance Mine realizes he likes Take, will Take reject Mine then?
Didn't like it at the beggining,, hiori basically forces take to rape mine,, it was confusing but i think i kinda understood it. i really like it but not too much. I have more to explain but im tired + i have to admit reading this exhausted me def would not read it again