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I think it would be nice to have a bridge from the moment they broke apart to coincidentally bumping into each other. It doesn’t have to be a whole separate chapter. It
could just be each panel mirrors what they were both doing and feeling for each year. It also gives a chance for future chapters to have more detailed flashbacks.
Kinda like this: one of the panels features ML eating steak with a friend or partner at this fancy restaurant to celebrate something. They’re enjoying their time together and then there’s a panel where ML briefly remembered how much MC loves meat. he chuckled quietly and immediately realize they aren’t together anymore. As the chuckles fade, his eyes dimmed and reflected emptiness.
Aw wish they kept the part when Yohan called that motherfucker who picked him up a mushroom-cap-looking-bastard. Let him drag their asses