Comments of Desire For Revenge

Why are bbv bad, isn't kimda necessary what if you end up physically incombitable to level it can't be resolved.?
Isn't okay for the sotry to go like that.

One of the better Penny Jordan stories. I didn't want the ML to die in a ditch and the FL was a little naive, but not an idiot.

I'm sad BBV (Bed Before Vows) was a required plot device, but other than that, I have to admit it was a sweet, light hearted story about growing up and realizing you are the author of your own story, and you can change. And I also like the final 'justice' page. It wrapped it up nicely.

I liked how it ended for the two in the end lol

Also the original author is dead sadly.

Good story, but ML is kinda annoying, kinda want FL make ML suffer a little bit!