1: oh man thi s was starting out cute but this little b word wants to suck dick now... No. this confession scene is so Cringe..... "im riddled with dark desires" GIRL YOURE JUST AN OLD MAN!!!!!!!!! Jeez. umm ok that was like a 5/10. blonde was much cuter without those sttupid ass glasses. black hair was verg cute but i dont like his stupid ass stupid assness. 2: so like what.. this is consensual kidnapping? did light hair raise black hair???? then thry date??? eughh!!! black hair just got chloroformed so ill head back yo the trenches now. ok i hate this ,..,,,black hair was just assaulted then they get home and light hairs like "Stick ya Butt out honeybear..." AGHHHH!!!!! that was really odd. 3/10 3: ugh they started out so cute why did you guys get all internalized homophobia on me.. HELPPP THE THE THE!!! AHH!!!! HELP ME!!!! HELP!!!! okay wrll yhis one was actually..... Yep. 7/10. Would like yo see.. More!!!! Pleae Date Pleade Date theyll date foreverrr and everrrr and never part until death!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!HYAAAAAGH!!!!!! oka sorry i pressed next chaoter anf yheres more hehe.... jeez blsck hairs brotherd are so weird why are they manipulating him thatd So Gorss. STAY OUT OF HIS LIFE B*TCH!!!!!(=_=;) their first chapter was a string 7/10 but the second one was a weak 6/10.
yeah. ok. im sorry this is long. ill cry if you dong read ghis fully. T_T
