Comments of Heart no Kagi o Te ni Irero!

I felt like seme was pushing the relationship.
Could have gone better with them starting as friends and actually developing a great relationship where they bring each other up. Feels like a totally unrequited love and uke just settling because he couldn’t have the sister. I wish seme realized his worth on his own, like maybe show him being proud of what he has achieved despite what his asshole father said, maybe even prove him wrong that would slap his insensitive ass. Felt too bland, i feel bad for seme, he actually deserves better.

I wish we had more

I feel decieved by the good reviews. This was bad storytelling.

Oh well thats not bad, the younger seme x older uke trope, the mc is belittled by his father and the ml is heartbroken, and on the drunken night the mc felt like irreplacable because of the ml but then when he found out turned out that the ml got his heart broken by the mc sister and furthermore his boss is his father, such fate involed with the whole family
Though it lacks the spices its still quite enjoyable read

bwisit yung tatay niya. pati ate niyang cheater at gaslighter gago yon.

very cute!! i really liked their relationship. siblings of ex-lovers is kinda risky i feel cuz its easy to make them seem like a replacement but that wasn't the feeling at all ^^
i also really liked it when tarou was improving so much at work lol i think stuff like that is cool

I didn't like the dad tho

that was sweet

So we'll written!! This is amazing!! Shiga and Tarou are such cuties I love them so much!! Though, I seriously hate Tarou's family.

Uke dumped by seme sister
Seme care for uke
Yada2, fallin in love

plot heavy + internalized homophobia on both mls (sad) but bearable

uhnggggggggg
edit: reading the comments be like wtf pals it ain't that deep...... it's just bl bruh chill...

Very very cute, made me feel butterflies, their relation seems genuine and fun

I give credit that the story has a happy ending but still it has a fucked up storyline. Definitely, not my type.

i like these buildup stories a lot but at the same time i don’t. sigh. amazing plot tho i also have a very ordinary name and i don’t hate it or anything but idk it just doesn’t carry any weight. so ofc i relate to suzuki. ashaksnamksns

Office setting
Cities

Need... to.... keep... steel face... I'm with my family rn. Can't... blushing... will... be bad if... I do but I have master this art for ages lmao pretty sure I can do this

"Fruitless love" you say... That's freaking hurt

Kinda hoping they would run away together but that's just mindless behavior, I know shit isn't real but

The moment he started talking, I'm so proud!!! Even the "lover" was too stunned to speak LMAO

We need a sequel

This needs bloody extras!

What a story..
IT COULD HAVE BEEN LONGER I WOULDNT COMPLAIN >< A slow paced story about his evolution as their love grows
Wholesome story, not psychological but very complicated characters, simple yet complicated feelings CERISE SUR LE GATEAU