Comments of Keloid

What. So lost

I literally read summary as-" having sexual relationship with his younger brother!" I have seriously lost my mind but summary says it's co-worker phew , it reminds me of latest yaoi story crazy love , but actually uke likes having sex with a guy he just used tht word to frame tht it's rape while it was not... And wtf I wanna know the scar story how could the hang us like this .

Un jeune étudiant fiancé subit le viol (?) d'un camarade de lycée (en fait amoureux). (un peu cliché mais acceptable).

Didn't care for it. One it did start as rape cause the uke was drunk. Two the seme is blackmailing him to continue. Three the uke does have feelings for him. Four the seme exposed the relationship to the Luke's girlfriend.

This is not and will not be a healthy relationship. I hate when one person forced their feelings on another and then blackmail them to continue. Anyone would be embarrassed to have pictures/videos of themselves expose to who knows what people your family , your coworkers, or even if you had them your children. Glad this is a one shot cause it doesn't need to be longer to tell the uke will be with seme and thinks it's love.

Hahaha ... this one is a bit on the dark side. Nice art, and a story/plot of a love triangle gone haywire ! A very good read !

Abd what about the scar???

Hmmm...Interesting. The facial expressions and eyes are what readers should focus on. It's a tricky, deceptive, kinda neat trick. This was fascinating and repulsive at the same time because not everyone reading this will understand the true dynamics of the two guys.

This was twisted. From both characters.

Ummmm...no. Shitty art. Shitty characters. Shitty story. Just shitty.

What the fuck does the scar have to do with anything? What was that first panel with fuckboi covered in scars?? WHAT IS THIS STUPID STORYTELLING??

This was so exciting! Wish there was more. I wanted to know where the two of them went from here.

Typical rape to "love" sort of story, where the uke feels guilty somehow toward his rapist. Gross and unoriginal. Art was so-so, not great, but I've seen worse, so I'll leave it at 1.5 stars.

Oneshot not bad
2019