It followed all the rules. The adult teacher did not initiate physical contact with the student, etc., etc.. He waited until graduation and adulthood. But the story is lifeless and dull as fuck, even with potentially cute characters. That's because it's written according to rule. It might as well have had a good social mores stamp of approval, but it doesn't make it any more interesting to read. I mean, seriously! Did they have some kind of committee meeting to decide what was proper to include? It's like the story was written by a committee.
Teacher x student in HS. This one-shot has a pretty typical setup but it's written with some interesting characters and plot points. It works well as a self contained story, although the ending is rushed and could've used 3-5 more pages. A satisfying read.
I have to say I'm proud of the teacher he knew not to cross that boundary and was willing to leave his job to keep away from the boy. You don't see that very often in teacher and student stories.
Omg this gave me such 7 days vibes~ I absolutely loved it!! When he ripped up the letter and told him he wouldn’t mess with him anymore my HEART BROKE! But then he graduated and got him!! Yes bih getcho man!! They were both hella cute and the art was very nice. Even though it was a one shot I really enjoyed it and it seemed finished. It left me wanting more and more but it didn’t leave me unconvinced. Super good read
it could have been better, but i liked it well enough. the main is kinda annoying, but he definitely undergoes some emotional maturing. decent art, like that they waited til he was legal.
4.5 just cause the age gap is a little to big for me (I know crazy) but I with they were closer in age but I think they are cute and im glad they waited