Comments of Seonbae USB Swapping Plan!

Not interested now... 052024

>-< I like this type of BL

Want 2024-05-05 18:00
Reading 2024-05-05 21:57
READ
Ass

Yaoi, Smut, College, Unrequited Love, Childhood Friends
Probably the worst yaoi I’ve read so far. The story is non existent, the artwork is sloppy, and it’s basically just about the sex scenes. The concept has potential, but the execution was just poorly done.

GGAAAAAAAAAWWDDDDDAAAAAMMMNNNNNNN

why it is so funny

plot was ass but the art is GORGEOUS hot

The only Drama in this was the plot. What the %#&!^×_+^@ was that??! The seme is a whole ass red flag tf. The uke kinda too 'cause why they so blind to see that red flag and ask the wrong questions??
(The only good thing is the art, that's gorgeous)

so much i wanna say about this. ehem

pros: idk what yall r on about with the 'bad translation'. I can't find anything wrong with the grammar or anything, besides some punctuation and the 'senior' part. I dunno, it's such a pet peeve of mine,, like who actually goes up to someone and says 'hey, senior!'??? in most cases, I hate when they don't use the specific font but it's usually annoying because the grammar is bad, unlike this one. anyways, it's not like this was translated by a scans group or whatever and it's genuinely impressive how natural the dialogue feels. tbh even some scans group can't do that props to the translator! next is the art and the coloring. I usually don't like reading manhwas because of the artstyle (pls don't attack me) because they're always so stiff but this one is just.. magnifique. I love the way they color especially it's so,,,, beautiful??? and the artstyle is just lovely, even if it's a lil unrealistic.

cons: the plot has potential but they played it out,, well,, terribly. like the senior guy is so damn weird and he def just wants him for his body. that little flashback at the end proved nothing. it was honestly, roughly put, nonsensical and dumb. wanting to take the lead in turn for blackmailing? like hello? maybe if done right some of this could've been better but it just.. wasn't. even though I talked abt the pros a lot, it's mostly just praising the translator and the art. if the plot ain't good, im not giving it 5 stars just for that! also I hate that the main guy always does the :3D face it's so annoying. close your damn mouth

Last read ch 4
Not only are they into each other but The art is so good! Definitely smut material

4
the translator's note on chap 4 is very ao3 coded LMFOOO im crying

straight up corn but idc it’s hot

Basically just all smut with minimal plot lol but I enjoyed it Art's amazing, and the uke's so cute! Love his design also these 2 kinda remind me of a pairing I really like

Isso é uma atrocidade. Código penal puro!

Beide vom selben Schlag, aber ehrlich jetzt sie sind süß zusammen.