Comments of Shan Yue

Pretty art but the story seems rushed tho. Fast paced to the point where everything is shown without even explaining how, when and what happened etc. Shanyue's hatred for the ML was gone for like 3-4 chaps without a proper development. Kinda disappointed since it has a good premise in the beginning.

this could have been better 4/10

What the fuck is that? I cringed so hard and then it left me hanging at the end. I felt that this will waste my time back in the first chapter but I still proceeded. It's my fault. I hate myself. This is rushed more than my 5 minutes essay. Like they slap everything in one bowl and shove the whole story into our mouths. I hate the seme for being so arrogant but easy to get hurt omfg and then the uke for being a weak ass but still thinking of revenge or I will get back to you in the future bullsh*t. AHHHH This ruined my night. Might as well get a good night sleep and delete this entire f*cking thing on my memory.

What a rushed ending! One died another followed. So died tgt

Bruhh what kind of ending was that

It had potential but the story was too fast pace for me to like it

Yep it's a good decision for me to have a sneak peek of the ending

Hmm so many time skips. this is kinda rushed. but overall i like this. the art is beautiful♡

Waste of time

wait huh ?its so meesy idk what going on tf ? so they dies that's it LMAO

Got to chap 7. Couldn't get what was going on. Dropped.

Ehhh?? This escalated so fast....what

Okayy that's too fast

I really love the story

It is really rush, I've even read it for at least 20 minutes.
Its the typical MC revenge, then falls in love with the ML, both die in the end. But what got me hook in is after reading I spend an hour or so imaging the story in more detailed naration in my head,which also made me stiff for that long.
Imaging how the mc started liking the ml in their trip for killing the nine tailed fox, to the third brother being possess by the demon king and allied with the general.
It did great for my story imagination. Do at your own (risk)validation.