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2024-05-10 23:27
Tags: #❤Yaoi❤ #BL #drama #romance #smut #beefy uke #big pecs/nipples #lewd uke #submissive male #big dick #older male #peachy ass #hot male
BL#2
The fuck do you mean by "officials". It makes CERO sense that a fan translation is of better quality than the "officials". Kawaiiberry was doing great with that intro, bring them back.
Who was the "official translator" for these "officials"? Fine them. Did people pay for these on the legit site? Like, for this crappy quality? That's a scam lol.
I know my self I love the crazyyness and I'll never forget this hahahahajaj
It needed more chapters they kinda conveyed the idea but I hated the older brother and wanted some justice ☹
I really liked the ending.
The story had potential, but the translations are far off.
2024-03-13 08:03
Tags: #Interesting #yaoi #beefy uke
Ch.9
This was extremely interesting! Too bad it's so short
they’re both crazy…What the fuck did i just read
Also, the translations fucking sucked
Both of them are red flags .
2024-02-25 12:46
Tags: #Yaoi #beefy uke #Smut #lewd uke #Interesting #submissive male #big dick #older male #Beautiful Art #hot male
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I feel like the translation was just bad that is why I couldn't understand a thing like what who when why how everything was confusing dear god help us anywho I wanted yo understand if hyung was true to his feelings or if he was just doing ut because he is self-centered I'll feel bad for Teeun if that's the case I wanted to understand the story because I think it has potential sadly it's just a short story
I lowkey love this, the translation just sucks but i still understand what they're tryna say. I love how it turns out they both unhinged and horny af... Although, the story seems to be lacking? It's like unfinished so it throws me off
I swear Ive read this before but why did it leave a sour taste in my mouth and why didnt I notice the grammar the first time
OK I can acknowledge this story is probably too good to warrant the one-star rating . . . But that translation is just total fucking ass. A translation so blatantly bad as this one is what ruins stories; so many pieces of dialogue either didn't make sense or took a lot of guesswork as to what it meant. If this were a small scanlation team I'd offer leeway . . . But this is official. What the fuck?
I did think Youngjoon & Taeeun had a lot of potential, I liked their characters. The last chapter especially cemented their dynamic, and the character of Youngjoon, as being something I actually really liked. Their relationship would have flourished in a longer story . . . Or maybe even just with a better translation. Youngjoon throughout the whole story is shown as just a little odd, Taeeun points out how weird it is that he's just going with the flow and accepting everything for a man he barely knows, so the last chapter revealing he actually has this intense obsession with Taeeun and wants to "trap" him in a sense was really good. I loved it. It does leave me questioning just when this obsession started—like maybe it was a play on the "love at first sight" trope or something, or maybe he actually knew about Taeeun before they met up—but not to a degree where I find it detrimental. I mean the story's one star so it wouldn't really matter anyway.
I did like the sexualization of violence, too. It's done in a very macabre way in this story, Taeeun in the final chapter gets hard hearing Youngjoon talk about his suicidal thoughts, and in chapter four Youngjoon ends up talking about the time he accidentally killed a puppy and they both cum when he finishes talking about it. It's incredibly fucking weird but I kind of liked it. These characters were far from normal people.
Taeeun's brother though was kind of annoying. There's this conflict where Taeeun believes he caught his brother, a grown man, trying to get with a teenager and that fractures their relationship . . . We learn his brother didn't actually try and get with the underage girl, but he refuses to tell Taeeun that. There was some pretentious reasoning behind it but it honestly just generally doesn't matter
They definitely TRIED to make a plot, I don't if it's the author or the translator but the story they were trying to tell didn't hit at all.