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It's not bad but it fell flat for a story that was so ambitious
Kinda rushed, but what the hell, sure.
2026-06-28 06:51
Tags: #want more!!! #Royalty #Adorable #which whore added wrong abusive seme tags #WAITING FOR THE NEXT CHAPTERS......
AHHHHHHHHHHH WHY DID IT ENDED
I was hooked at the first half but things lowk turned downhill.. I read this in one sitting and I was bored midway (specifically when the art turned them slowly into a twinkstyle & around the time the eye patch guy regained his memories) the ending also felt rushed.. it's like the author got lazy.. 'the spirit god teleported old geezer & mc in his domain to kill the oldie and end the series.' that's basically the summary of it lol
plots with good first half but disappointing final half
NINDOT SIYA PERO BITCH!? KUWANG PA OI CLIFFHANGER KAAYO
This was such an absurd story, with absurd characters that don't make any sense! they act like they are schizophrenic; especially the mc and the ml, their personalities are so inconsistent like??? what am i reading here ? who is this person? the writing is just so unbalanced and messy and don't let me even start with the sex scenes... yikes! If you're unable to write tolerable sex scenes with dialogues that don't make me wanna barf at how ridiculous they sound then don't write them! don't force yourself and force us to read this abhorrent garbage. please!
I stayed at 55, not particularly impressed
2026-06-11 22:40
Tags: #Yellow
GENUINELY what is going on. Like the plot has barely moved and I’m only 10 chapters from finishing . Horrible sex.. it has moments where I’m interested and then it just drags …
The final were bad and rushed but overall good
erm.. the ending was rushed. it couldve be better
2026-05-17 01:47
Tags: #BL