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3.5/5 Stars - Very refreshing premise and narrative. It starts out a bit shaky, but I really love how their dynamics become and how they grow as a couple. Although I enjoy a slow burn and a relationship that develops over time, I wish there would’ve been more intimate moments and dialogue with them. Somewhere along the way he plot loses it‘s momentum and the last chapters are WAY too rushed, but I am glad that the author at least finished the story and they got their happy endings!
I agree. For me, the story started to falter when Glunn "loses his feelings," or whatever that was. Up until that point, I was devouring each chapter, one after the other, completely captivated by the plot. After that, it became sluggish and never fully recovered, although it did gradually improve. The ending was nice, rushed, and a bit cheesy, but it leaves you with a sense of closure and happiness in the characters' lives. All in all, very nice, very cute. It didn't feel like a waste of time at all, so that good.
True! The part where he lost his emotions was very sloppy and not thoroughly described
4/5 Stars PWP — Can‘t take the story serious because of the start and the permanent smut sksk but as a PWP it‘s really good and they are a sweet and non-toxic green flag couple (apart from the dubious beginning)