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Beginning 5/5, End 1.5/5, Smut 1/5 — This started out so good, just what happened? The plot lost itself midway and the last chapter was rushed; there is literally no ending. It ends sure, but there is no satisfyingly and logical solution or aha-moment for any of the involved characters, or us readers. Biggest disappointment I‘ve ever read.

3.5/5 Stars PWP — This was actually much more interesting and engaging thsn I first thought! Also it‘s extremely green flagged, also they actually spend some time getting to know each other before getting intimate - and it even had an actual kingdom/history plot, not only juicy smut! I agree it’s albeit superficial and the drama easily solved, but still, I really did enjoy their relationship and antics! ლ(´ڡ`ლ)

3/5 Stars - PWP — I‘m conflicted how to rate this; it has potential, but it‘s way too rushed and then it‘s mostly juicy smut and ends abruptly— I guess, it‘s a good short pwp read?! ╮(￣▽￣)╭

2.5/5 Stars — It got potential, but it lost it‘s momentum right from the start and didn’t pick it up; I feel the author had lots of ideas and threw them all in hazardously, but didn’t follow through or go into depth with any of them, so as a result the whole story feels somewhat shallow. As a PWP with a bit of emotion it‘s okay, otherwise it‘s (sadly) very forgettable.

Also wtf is with this crumbs of Shio being in love with this adoptive father — that came out of nowhere, was absolutely unnecessary for the "plot" and (thankfully!!) was dropped.

Dropped at 6th chapter; maybe it‘s the bad translation, but I really have no effin idea wth is happening and that’s just frustrating to read on ╮(￣▽￣)╭

Does someone know similar stories （/TДT)/ ?

2/5 Stars — Sorry, but they are just annoying. They basically have no real personalities, the top is a total manipulative jerk, mc is a whiny simp, but ultimately lets the ml do whatever he wants. There’s WAY too much unmotivated smut and the plot is not plotting. I don’t know how this has such a good rating, but for me it‘s a cliche and your typical tropes spiked story, without any charme ┑(￣Д ￣)┍

2,5/5 — it‘s an okay read; I don’t feel anything special about it and I don’t feel a spark in their dynamics. There‘s also not a real plot? And it’s WAY too much smut, but without any intimacy or erotic feeling to it. I skipped through most of it tbh. Also the switch from „We’re just fuck buddies“ to „I love you“ was not genuine, I didn’t feel it at all. Honestly, I only read it cause I where bored haha and left somewhere after season 2 (the kid is cute, though it just a plot device for them to move forward)

3.5/5 Stars — The story is nothing unusual, the pairing is also a wide known trope and there’s lots of things that are messy (patient-doctor, tutor-highschool, lack of communication) but I still liked it tho??Especially towards the later half their relationship and dynamics got sweeter; Soo~ I’d say the story is lukewarm, but the smut is hot (づ￣ ³￣)づ I‘m pretty sure I won‘t re-read it, but I‘d still recommend giving it a go

3.5/5 Stars — It‘s a really interesting premise, I love Jelly and the little humorous antics. I truly wish for more indepth storytelling and more spark and intimacy between the main couple; and by intimacy I don’t mean the smut, but their dynamics and relationship. It remains somewhat superficial, which is to be said with all of the characters. It also ends pretty abruptly, I wish there would’ve been more lore (づ￣ ³￣)づ cause it really was a promising read!