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I like this one a lot. If that boy only knew...However, I DON'T like the lengthened version. It wasted the integrity and depth of the original
Second story in the Viper series. Can a gang member actually leave Viper? This one has a comedic tone, compared to the rest in this series.
Interesting concept, but in reality I think it would end differently.
Suho and Chiwon, coming from the same orphanage and members of the Viper organization. Suho, with the support of President Kim, opened a room saloon and Chiwon, seeing Suho in that situation, sets a trap to destroy him.
βIt's okay, Hyung. I'll kill him."
Not gonna lie: This one messed me up pretty badly. Santa or Satan? And I never want to see a lengthened version! That would kill me and this is perfect as is!
This one also messed me up badly.
One betrays his lover and his group by defecting to their rivals. This one has a definite psychopath.
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