"avoid these" stories

ch 1-43 was fun, light-hearted, and enjoyable
ch 44-100+KILLS ME
around ch 100 did it finally felt so repetitive: crying, talks about dying, how to die, kill me, god
the way the author tried to make her look capable w military and finance was sad to read
so much focus on god when I didn't came here for god
intro smth just to forget it TOO MANY TIMES
brother thinks sister is his revived lover. sister and duke knows the truth but plays w the idea anyway and not tell him hehehaha >:((

Became uncomfortable to read
- her goal is somewhat clear, but her actions are barely present
- she overthinks and drags things on when a topic could've been shortened by more than half
- her feelings and opinions are too wishy-washy, she's not determined when she's supposed to be
overall: story feels like playing with dolls, not inspiring, too much monologuing
Can be nerverecking but should also be comedic & determined (overtime)
and have clear development

Story sidetracks a lot, too many topics = diluted, slow, no climax or compelling obstacle (wasn’t important to the MC)
Revealed his idol's a guy & it gave you the doki? So?
Why not find out the guy you like is the idol & you accept this part of them that they were insecure about?
Idol guy was so skeptical & serious on catch him slipping up, turns out he’s just a goof, then he fcked him..sigh
Romance should be secondary. What are their goals & aspirations?

I like blushes, but she blushes too much TT
It actually looks like she's sick/dying/uncomfortable/horny every time she blushes too much TT
when important scenes come along, you just look the same!! BLUSHING, that's all you're ever doing in every single panel 99%
it really lacks the relaxing, more casual and fun scenes, always go straight to the doki-doki scenes but THERE'S TOO MUCH that nothing
WE NEED SPACE
if this story could cherish blushes more and change formats

I dropped this early on around 10 ch cuz without my crying baby boy, this story legit had nothing else to keep me from reading it sadly
girl one day woke up to have noticed she'd slept with a man when she was drunk last night, left, the man followed her, he's cute, left, met him again, it was all fake.
At no point in 10 ch did I fall in love w any character besides him, but his baby face was fake & never appeared again.
I didn't feel anything for the FL or cared what she'll do next.

Gary Stu
Emperor married her, in the past obviously loves her, after spending their night together after getting married, he asked for a divorce cuz it's not what he wanted but his grandpa. Years later after hiding her child, he found her again and questions her: Why did you leave me? Why do you keep on running away? You made my grandma sad apparently. He wants her back despite doing all of that bullshit. She refuses every time. The child comes first, and you'll never be her priority

mm just feels watered down, lacking, generic
I like his relationship w the queen & her son tho (wholesome)
ig, the mains' characters are somewhat flat w nothing charming
White is a weak af, damsel but loves Black
Black is strong, in a different timeline loved White
White time traveled back, & is now more pushy abt marrying him, and Black is uncomfortable...
White pov of Black doesn't develop or anything new
nothing new is being created, just feels pushy

Terrible introduction: FL sad she can't make any friends at the start of the school year, a guy presents himself, she blew him off..FL is also not in a position to complain abt which club she joins cuz it's required for her grade + past the deadline, Pinky came to her with a club, she blows him off, not even asking what club it is, just blows everyone off, but after pestering & acting cute, he convinces her..She then licked his hand in the club I think..
Overall: idk who she is

meh, interesting world & people's pov
lacks humor & is predictable/mediocre & stereotypical w system

Why does it follow the format of many stories I like, but still lacks?

Solo Leveling: mc worked, got stronger, heart stayed the same
Penelope: villainess' & her story intertwines, she's smart, witty, has personality & experience outside of this game, emotional conntection & experience reading it
both mentally strong, charming facing challenges

Mary Sue
Physically strong characters that kill people with just one slash, isn't exactly appealing;;;
It's an interesting idea: a girl raised by the grim reaper
But the idea was barely fleshed out
I do like her childish side, but the brainless + killing beings without fear or remorse + eats happily right afterwards + no one is disturbed about any of this...
I just find it boring
There's no emotional dynamic change