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wtf was that 1st chapter
immediate drop
author please, keep your fantasies to yourself cuz it doesn't work in a story unless there's layers of complexity or credibility on how strong their feelings are for each other which gives the story more meaning and purpose...scratch that
WHY DID IT START WITH HIS PET DOG TRANSFORMING INTO A MAN AND IMMEDIATELY FCKS HIM & HE ENOJYS IT!!??!

holy shit 1st short story was terrible;;
bulletpoint/rough draft-like, good introduction to finding out his crush already has a bf and then mc gets hit by a truck, but everything else..
what remains is yearning so you decided to go to the orphanage to groom a kid into loving you for you and not for money, you met eyes with a kid you just met &decided to be a father. Fastforward, MC didn't groom him but just raised him. He hoped he'd find a good women, kid turns adult &fcked him

"I'm looking for the boy that I love after leaving him in the cold"
"Oh I just wanted to be loved but now it's too late..you don't know why ur drugged but none of it matters but that you get what it feels to be an omega &suffer like I once did" fcked, tortured him
"You know him? What can I do to meet him?"
"Make me fall in love with you, heh"
falls in love, shares his terrible past, reveals he's the boy
disbelief, fcks him more
sigh

I read to see if the mc would tell the prince the truth already even though theres so much sex scenes uugh... TT
it's trash, I dropped it
it uses the same format, horny 24/7 characters never change, and I dislike that the MC is like the literal embodiment of a weak, helpless, unintelligent character without breaking out of it
overall brain rot story, with barely a story to mention of

BURN THIS SHIT
FL has no personality, is brainless, and is ignorant, just like the author wanted
ML is a heartless murderer and ruler, a terrible conversationalist, and a psycho with the occasional small "green flag" moments
consists of terrible miscommunication, or rather no communication at all cuz ML cuts off any conversation or somebody's head if he ever feels remotely annoyed
overall: hot trash

from bad to being unreadable
ya girl has no damn personality = not a character/person
they both figured out they love each other early on :(
author made her have insecurities for no reason cuz wtf has she been doing for all those years she stayed at his home??? eat cake, shit, and sleep???
everything gets "fixed" too easily
all this story talks abt is "ur pretty" and "gosh he's handsome"
no thoughts, just love
no other goals but to be his wife ig
still timid