"avoid these" stories

I have a few things to say about this story, including thoughts and experience and improvements, all in the review comment section. Realistic is good, but connecting with the characters was difficult, the overall mood of this story isn't interesting but gloomy, it's a pretty toxic relationship, and overall could've been better with minor changes and perhaps less fixation to seggs. The communication in here was BAD btw, could improve on that and expand on moving on.

This just show that I don't like toxic or uncomfortable relatonships, like the piano story

MC is written as an annoying phony idiot, switching from pleasing him to regretting it. MC rambles absurd distasteful perverted excuses to get her out of trouble. We know nothing abt her, only surface lv thoughts: surviving n how terrified she is. Superficial interactions. story isnt rich, transition to devil's servant was bad. Terrified of him, but casually willing to get involved w murder, just to regret it. Unrealistic romance cuz of this but kinda good when u forget everything

I wish it could've been done better. There is a setup but it doesn't explore the main character's tragedy, but instead is more hyperfocused on her boys and her husband, who she cares about. I want more of her healing process and finding friends and not stay stuck in place.

It started out being cute and dreamy, but it was clear that the MCs are pretty flat, and now it's just dragging out the ending. Having tea with the Fairy Kings are getting boring, this sea of jealousy is annoying, and I'm done with the whole formula of ML being overly protective and clingy while FL is embarrassed. The obstacles have gotten petty and childish, with the Fairy Sea King having misunderstandings that could easily be fixed with communication.

A plain, modest, and polite mc who lacks empathy and any emotions unless he's with his lil brother, Ryu Won. Throughout the story, the future is easily predictable, and he never struggles at all. It's reasonable for him to have a subtle god complex, but it comes off as obnoxious. If the author could focus more on giving him emotions and feelings of connection with others, instead of giving him rapists and murderers to kill to "gain likability", it wouldn't feel so dirty.

....what's the point of this story again? I swear reading it the first time was kind of alright. However, after reading it again up to ch 35, I've concluded that the MC will stay forever bland while everyone near her becomes yanderes who are crazy for her. I guess the authors just really love the innocent & overly modest FL, but the yanderes are extreme;;; The only time she was ever emotional was a random ch where she suddenly recovers her lost memories~~ Honestly cheered for her having emotions

the usual overly manufactured story, but w poor storyboard
it makes me question just how can we write in a way that could evoke the emotions we want out of the readers
is this enemies to lovers? I feel as though the important connection they have is taking too long to be mentioned
is the hook their regressions?
would it be better if she's connected to someone in his family, or that he murdered her many times? or that she's fake af?
ch 67 reveals the whole plot is bullshit :o

stories are like sharing our ideals w others
this story didn't have to be long or introduce the twisted crown prince n his mother
it had a clear beginning w introducing Rona's loyalty n care for Ileon when no one did because it would not had benefited them
the moments when he truly felt like she was not going to leave like the other employees was a very special moment
however, Rona, knowing the novel n being a liar n pushover, led everything estray
learn from Mr. Delivery Knight

Lighthearted n meh enjoyable, it still feels lacking in weight n meat. translucent
the idea/form of their relationship is there but story is onesided for the most part
figure is visibly a women n his neighbor, but there's too much of [I love you] thoughts
== just a role for him to project his fantasies on (not extreme tho)
plus the onesided giving food without eating food together
story gives him excuses to run away than to face her
== she remains figure/role > person