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I didn't like it. It feels like it lacks something but I can't figure out what. The art is...

mannouchan December 25, 2015 6:04 pm

I didn't like it. It feels like it lacks something but I can't figure out what.
The art is so beautiful though.

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    lenalena December 26, 2015 6:02 pm

    I think I was confused most of the time.

    SkitKat12 December 27, 2015 2:06 am

    probably the lack of knoledge on the dad and the ukes backstory- It's clear he had some things going on with a few guys we met here and there and it's also clear the father did as well. The uke was clearly loyal to the seme though and had clearly been in love with him for sometime- As he says. But when did it start? When he was a child or [erhaps it was that one glimpse we had of him with a girl- Maybe it clicked in then. Had the seme ever thought of him as something else before? There's just some things that are left out that most mangas cover even if they are just fleeting.

    xokiminightmare January 16, 2016 5:37 pm

    I agree :o I felt left out most of the manga. And some of the bubbles actually confused me as to who was talking (that might just be me heheh) it took me a bit to figure out everyone's names too. o-O I couldn't really tell until the last cover. And they never mentioned the store name, or maybe I missed it??

    The characters (main) are rlly cute <3 but it lacked depth and knowledge that I've seen even in cliche stories. Cute tho. But I wouldn't read again ^^

    surufa March 1, 2016 10:25 am

    I was thinking the same, the plot is quite interesting but the flow and storyline are a little bit messed up