Pretty nice dialogues, overall. If this were a movie, I'd say the ML was thoroughly upstaged by the ex-husband and the son. Like, look alive brother, you can be more than "pretty, tragic and pathetic" but you gotta get your ass in gear. And let me just add: trying to threaten via the downtrodden "I can use my connections" being overturned by "I AM THE BOSS" Was severely satisfying.
Pretty nice dialogues, overall.
If this were a movie, I'd say the ML was thoroughly upstaged by the ex-husband and the son. Like, look alive brother, you can be more than "pretty, tragic and pathetic" but you gotta get your ass in gear.
And let me just add: trying to threaten via the downtrodden "I can use my connections" being overturned by "I AM THE BOSS"
Was severely satisfying.