Don't get me wrong I like the story, however, it seems a little fast paced; it's as if there are pages or maybe even chapters missing. If it was really written this way I wonder why the author decided to make it a quicker story, the primary issue seems to almost be resolved in two chapters... Based on the character introduction and plot set up it seems like a story that would have longer development.. hhhmmmm just a thought.
Don't get me wrong I like the story, however, it seems a little fast paced; it's as if there are pages or maybe even chapters missing. If it was really written this way I wonder why the author decided to make it a quicker story, the primary issue seems to almost be resolved in two chapters... Based on the character introduction and plot set up it seems like a story that would have longer development.. hhhmmmm just a thought.