Punchline: The storyline is like written by a 13 year old newborn fujoshi in wattpad like come on.
This would be so much better if the author actually focused on the plot. Like I guess the author wants to put sexual violence in this story, which I dont blame since some stories are interesting in their own way, however, i think the author should put the resolve in this matter ('Rape is Rape', no matter how they try to explain the seme's backstory. Like for example, if someone steals but they reasoned out theyre poor. Does it mean stealing is good? Absolutely not. Is it justifyable? What theyre doing is illegal, so still no) I guess its rushed since the story isnt getting good responses from readers?
The end is pretty rushed, sounds like a third-rate wattpad story, art was good but really lacked the essence of the storyline. Really hope for improvements in the storyline for the author. They have rooms for improvements and I hope they listen to the readers as well.
ps. yall know what the ending should be? Seme in Jail hahaha cock
Punchline: The storyline is like written by a 13 year old newborn fujoshi in wattpad like come on.
This would be so much better if the author actually focused on the plot. Like I guess the author wants to put sexual violence in this story, which I dont blame since some stories are interesting in their own way, however, i think the author should put the resolve in this matter ('Rape is Rape', no matter how they try to explain the seme's backstory. Like for example, if someone steals but they reasoned out theyre poor. Does it mean stealing is good? Absolutely not. Is it justifyable? What theyre doing is illegal, so still no) I guess its rushed since the story isnt getting good responses from readers?
The end is pretty rushed, sounds like a third-rate wattpad story, art was good but really lacked the essence of the storyline. Really hope for improvements in the storyline for the author. They have rooms for improvements and I hope they listen to the readers as well.
ps. yall know what the ending should be? Seme in Jail hahaha cock