Ok so notice what everyone’s been saying bout this. I don’t think its all over the place but I do think its been told too fast. I really like how the fl is impatient about her revenge and cant seem to hold her grudge against Florre Cuz not much people irl these days can control their emotions. But the ml is there to calm her down anyways. It has a lot of potential but they keep forgetting to put the antagonists’ povs and the way the put them is as if they’re trying to put something in between thats not gonna fit.
Ok so notice what everyone’s been saying bout this. I don’t think its all over the place but I do think its been told too fast. I really like how the fl is impatient about her revenge and cant seem to hold her grudge against Florre Cuz not much people irl these days can control their emotions. But the ml is there to calm her down anyways. It has a lot of potential but they keep forgetting to put the antagonists’ povs and the way the put them is as if they’re trying to put something in between thats not gonna fit.