Ermmm NO, it’s just wrong on so many levels I mean you can make a twisted story all you want but a shallow twisted story just comes off as shallow and demeaning given you want the readers to like give meaning and understand it from their own point of views however it wouldn’t hurt to shed a bit of light or something to help clear up those views correctly with like a definitive explanation or something it just seems all over the place like the bathroom scene....just lifeless and bland and just horrendous which may be what the author is aiming for however well yennnnn it’s just so-so for me
Ermmm NO, it’s just wrong on so many levels I mean you can make a twisted story all you want but a shallow twisted story just comes off as shallow and demeaning given you want the readers to like give meaning and understand it from their own point of views however it wouldn’t hurt to shed a bit of light or something to help clear up those views correctly with like a definitive explanation or something it just seems all over the place like the bathroom scene....just lifeless and bland and just horrendous which may be what the author is aiming for however well yennnnn it’s just so-so for me