Instead of being determined to flee, she should solidify her role as duchess and gain connections. I get that she's fearful of him, but it kinda conflicts with her goal. Because at times she would have paralyzing fear,that caused her to close herself off at first and try to avoid him. But then she'll casually take trip to an investigation scene for what purpose other than curiousity? I expected from how terrified she was she was gonna make a plan which needs connections and allies in small moves. However I'm not mad at her she just needs more time but it seemed she wouldve had more if there weren't hella time skips.
I'm not saying she can't be scared, however the author shows her fear to a certain level it's confusing for her to make certain choices. Like she goes from someone might take my life scared to they're unsettling but I'll still do what I want.
It's probably the pacing of the story itself,but there needs to be more scenes as to why she isn't deeply terrified as the beginning chapters. Because NOTHING was said aside from the line that get married or die I think. There was no discussion if alternatives or anything or the why they were killed at night where anyone can see
Also free thought remember how mc spread the rumor if l being at the jewelers herself while being the person receiving it later on? Wouldn't that be suspicious asf,ig it could pass off tho.
I guess I could be reading into things too much because the plot isn't lead by political goals. It's a romance with politics to add spice not make senseq
I need more growth from her and another 10 chapters, to make a decent review it's far too early since 30 chapters is how I feel out a story
Instead of being determined to flee, she should solidify her role as duchess and gain connections. I get that she's fearful of him, but it kinda conflicts with her goal. Because at times she would have paralyzing fear,that caused her to close herself off at first and try to avoid him. But then she'll casually take trip to an investigation scene for what purpose other than curiousity? I expected from how terrified she was she was gonna make a plan which needs connections and allies in small moves. However I'm not mad at her she just needs more time but it seemed she wouldve had more if there weren't hella time skips.
I'm not saying she can't be scared, however the author shows her fear to a certain level it's confusing for her to make certain choices. Like she goes from someone might take my life scared to they're unsettling but I'll still do what I want.
It's probably the pacing of the story itself,but there needs to be more scenes as to why she isn't deeply terrified as the beginning chapters. Because NOTHING was said aside from the line that get married or die I think. There was no discussion if alternatives or anything or the why they were killed at night where anyone can see
Also free thought remember how mc spread the rumor if l being at the jewelers herself while being the person receiving it later on? Wouldn't that be suspicious asf,ig it could pass off tho.
I guess I could be reading into things too much because the plot isn't lead by political goals. It's a romance with politics to add spice not make senseq
I need more growth from her and another 10 chapters, to make a decent review it's far too early since 30 chapters is how I feel out a story