INOPUDDING

Instead of being determined to flee, she should solidify her role as duchess and gain connections. I get that she's fearful of him, but it kinda conflicts with her goal. Because at times she would have paralyzing fear,that caused her to close herself off at first and try to avoid him. But then she'll casually take trip to an investigation scene for what purpose other than curiousity? I expected from how terrified she was she was gonna make a plan which needs connections and allies in small moves. However I'm not mad at her she just needs more time but it seemed she wouldve had more if there weren't hella time skips.

I'm not saying she can't be scared, however the author shows her fear to a certain level it's confusing for her to make certain choices. Like she goes from someone might take my life scared to they're unsettling but I'll still do what I want.

It's probably the pacing of the story itself,but there needs to be more scenes as to why she isn't deeply terrified as the beginning chapters. Because NOTHING was said aside from the line that get married or die I think. There was no discussion if alternatives or anything or the why they were killed at night where anyone can see

Also free thought remember how mc spread the rumor if l being at the jewelers herself while being the person receiving it later on? Wouldn't that be suspicious asf,ig it could pass off tho.

I guess I could be reading into things too much because the plot isn't lead by political goals. It's a romance with politics to add spice not make senseq


I need more growth from her and another 10 chapters, to make a decent review it's far too early since 30 chapters is how I feel out a story

Yuna isn't a manipulative character. She is someone who sees an opportunity and goes for it. She's a person who when offered or available she'll fuck a guy. She recognized ml was in love with Sophie but ml never committed to Sophie so yuna kept trying to pursue the guy she likes. Overall it's the fault of the main character for not making up his damn mind. If he told tuna no I don't wanna have sex with you she wouldn't pressure him she'll feel sad because she does like this guy but she'll give up. So she's best girl

Sophie trying to overcompensate to stay relevant for the main character and being insecure makes the reader feel sad for her. However it's annoying how indecisive she is. She literally said I'm not going to adult stream with you if it's with tuna, and did it anyway.but she is best girl too

Honestly I dislike mc bc he literally assaulted Sophie for views then later back tracked and said this is not what I wanted my channel to be. He's indecisive af and is stringing yuna and Sophie along bc he can't choose so

Honestly I was hoping yuna, Sophie,and him would be in a poly relationship bc Sophie can give him the emotional connection that he wants, while with yuna he can be more rough or cruel bc she likes that while yuna is more silent in her affection. Yuna is a show and not tell but Sophie is a tell and not show person mostly.

Yuna wanted mc bc he satisfied her,and she liked how he was even before sex. It's was a bonus he was kinky

Sophie wanted a place to stay and money but slowly fell for him

Honestly I'll take both of em bc they're wonderful ladies,and if they had their own screen time to understand each other they'd get along minus the jonathan jealousy