the older friend is an ass. he doesn't even look worried for the mc, I don't like him and if my theory about the dad (the dad being in love with one of the parents of the little brother, probably the father of little brother and mc dad treating him better than his own son is because the little brother looks like his father ) also right i will hate him :D Nice story though! The foreshadowing is amazing and very clean here
regarding the memories of the mc, it needs to be shown more to exactly think if the mc was assaulted or not because in a lot of stories sometimes when they show the memory and past, the truth turns out to be something else... especially in Chinese novel i have read before
the older friend is an ass. he doesn't even look worried for the mc, I don't like him and if my theory about the dad (the dad being in love with one of the parents of the little brother, probably the father of little brother and mc dad treating him better than his own son is because the little brother looks like his father ) also right i will hate him :D Nice story though! The foreshadowing is amazing and very clean here
regarding the memories of the mc, it needs to be shown more to exactly think if the mc was assaulted or not because in a lot of stories sometimes when they show the memory and past, the truth turns out to be something else... especially in Chinese novel i have read before