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Chapter 9 mature version translation (please note)

shizu-chan July 16, 2021 10:01 pm

hmmmm...I think they're recycling the censored version for the uncensored chapters..
it's kinda hmmm.
1. Soohyun doesn't call eunsung's friend "a dumbass" but rather 문외한, which means an outsider/3rd party, like he said in the last chapter "an idiot who has no idea what the situation really is..." (as in what happened between them at the hotel, and the deal he made with eunsung last time they met) - i.e. he said because a third party (his friend) was involved now or would interfere (?), he wouldn't keep the deal on anymore.

2. Eunsung doesn't say "I'm not exactly hankering to do it with you again. I didn't imagine you'd barge in like this" but instead says "I know I said that, but I don't have intention of doing it with you again so soon. I didn't know/think you were the promiscuous~ type." (Which is said in a teasing tone ofc, since soohyun's "first time" was the time at the hotel when they had sex earlier (eunsung is his first for all the things - first love, first kiss (which soohyun did in this chapter), and first time having sex) - (author has confirmed soohyun was a virgin, and has lower sexual desire than people his age so he isn't keen on having sex before - obviously that changed when he met eunsung again, who is the only person who manages to stir him up (since high school)) - (eunsung has done it a few times before, but he didn't sleep around. Soohyun thinks munseop had his way with eunsung at first (and was his first time) and is pissed - and that's why he violated him as well, since he learnt sex from that maniac. Eunsung doesn't deny it then, but apologizes for ruining his first time, which pisses off soohyun even more, because it implied he was hurt emotionally by that, which he didn't want to admit)

3. To which soohyun replies, "Whose fault do you think this whole situation is? When I think about that time, I start boiling with such rage that I can't even fall asleep. To relieve my built up rage, I need to do with you whatver I want at least once. I need to repay it, twice as hard. Shall we start with the first hit (lit. Translation) /first repayment?" (As in first of the two times he's going to defile him to repay him)

4.He says while holding his face, "It will be worth seeing such a handsome face (lit. A perfect face with no flaws) be covered in tears."

5.And when eunsung challenges him to start taking his revenge with a smirk like he knew he couldn't do it, soohyun doesn't say "Don't underestimate me." Before kissing him, But rather "He's looking down on me."

Which kinda is more consistent with how soohyun perceives himself in eunsung's eyes, that he's always so above him, that he's always looking down on him.

6. When soohyun asks him why he was kissing the other dude back them if they weren't lovers, eunsung actually holds his face and says, "By that logic, I kissed you too, and after having sex, is there something between us now? He kissed me first on his own (that dude from then) Are you jealous? It's kind of cute/ You're kind of acting cute/ you look a little adorable." (*cute squeal* eunsung-ah, my sunshine~ my vitamin~ )

I was kinda looking forward to the mature translations but they really gonna do this again huh...oh well. If they were gonna recycle the same shit, they shouldn't make people pay for it twice.

Responses
    Ann July 17, 2021 7:53 am
    Their conversations are about business but they're not like this at all...they sound very American and not really accurately as well..Eun-soo relationship isn't cold - though soohyun does put up a lot of barrie... shizu-chan

    thank you. how about chapter 36 is there any dialogue that you feel off & very2 bad that you need to explained?

    shizu-chan July 17, 2021 7:55 am
    thank you. how about chapter 36 is there any dialogue that you feel off & very2 bad that you need to explained? Ann

    Hahaha the WHOLE chapter is need of re-translation....I mean the translations before were bad, but this chapter was probably the worst one done so far. Just terrible. :(((

    DorianGrey July 17, 2021 1:35 pm

    (I keep reading this thread y'all... RIP cute Eunsung in the English translations T.T)

    shizu-chan July 17, 2021 1:39 pm
    (I keep reading this thread y'all... RIP cute Eunsung in the English translations T.T) DorianGrey

    ┗( T﹏T )┛ RIP sexy and sassy soohyun as well...and funny and cunning sunbae....they've butchered it so nicely...especially soohyun and eunsung....especially especially eunsung...he's simply the bestestestestest

    NekoLoka July 17, 2021 2:19 pm
    Spoil you? Um, which chapter didn't you understand? Or what are you confused about in the raws? I'll gladly clarify it for you. I have a made few threads before in the comments about the "spoilers" / translatio... shizu-chan

    I ask you here or do I give you my hotmail?
    And they are questions above all, because I only read the bad translation, I made a small personal translation of chapter 26 and 27 before it came out, then I realized that it was wrongly translated when at first it didn´t mention that Soohyun came when Eunsung said his name, and when he was so embarrassed that his face was covered, Eunsung told him that if he felt shy he could turn around so that his face wouldn´t be seen; and then there are the raws, there I have many questions since I don´t understand Korean, and my personal translations are from using google translator.
    If I had to ask a question from the raws (What interests me the most), would Eunsung have an interest or crush on Soohyun in the past?
    And now that they have started interacting and collaborating in the present, is he interested in maintaining or advancing his current relationship with Soohyun, and protecting him from the rapist teacher and probably Soohyun himself?
    It makes me laugh that Eunsung is jealous of the reporter when his biggest rival is probably himself, I mean the idealized version that Soohyun sees, that version that is superior and looks at everyone with contempt and doesn´t care Soohyun at all (Although Soohyun is starting to know the real Eunsung, but I think it will be difficult for him to break that ideal that he has).
    And a question about the past that I have is: Why did Eunsung rape Soohyun in the beginning?
    From the things that I have learned, Eunsung hates the rapist teacher with all his soul, and he isn´t in favor of his immoral behavior, not to say that watching the flashbacks, Eunsung isn´t a sexual predator, he was someone normal in terms of morality ( At least my opinion, I can be wrong).
    So I didn't understand why he did that to Soohyun, was it because he thought Soohyun was on the rapist teacher's side, or because of how Soohyun mentioned earlier that he unconsciously learned from the rapist teacher and how he had a past attraction with Soohyun plus he was pissed off at him , did that?
    I ask because the impression I have of Eunsug isn´t that of someone physically forcing someone to get what he wants (Although I can be wrong), besides that apart from the first time, he hasn´t forced Soohyun again.
    Personally, I don´t like rapes in BL, especially if they are poorly written psychologically (Like love=rape, or there are no emotional wounds or trauma on the victim, the rapist not redeems himself and still ends up with the victim, or mental and emotional intelligence of every character is low when it comes to dealing with these issues), but in this work I liked it because it is well written psychologically and there are reasons for everything, and sex isn´t for easy fanservice but as you said, the way for Soohyun and Eunsung on getting to know each other for real (When they made the deal, Eunsung became very nice to Soohyun in sex, focusing on pleasing him, I noticed that).
    If it's too long, I don't mind you contacting me through my hotmail, I sent you my email in your mailbox.

    Ann July 17, 2021 4:55 pm
    I ask you here or do I give you my hotmail?And they are questions above all, because I only read the bad translation, I made a small personal translation of chapter 26 and 27 before it came out, then I realized... NekoLoka

    wow. i also want to know about that. also i'm agree with you that eunsung biggest rival is probably the high school version of him. with sohyun personality i doubt advancing their relationship would be easy.
    i retranslate the chapter you talking about, and just like you said the translation are totally off.by asking sohyun to turn around so he would not feel embrassed by seeing his face is totally give different meaning since the current translation give off the feeling that eunsung only care about his pleasure. retranslate though might not very accurate but it give totally different meaning better than official translation i suppose. and when their had sex in the car, eunsung had become more and more sweet toward sohyun. i also dont mind if you want to contacting me using email. it hard to find checkmate fandom. there might be korean one but since i cannot read korean it impossible(⌒▽⌒)

    NekoLoka July 17, 2021 5:25 pm
    wow. i also want to know about that. also i'm agree with you that eunsung biggest rival is probably the high school version of him. with sohyun personality i doubt advancing their relationship would be easy. i ... Ann

    I have sent you my hotmail in your mailbox (If you do not receive it, I will write it here directly).
    And if I would like to talk to you about Checkmate, I am also excited to have more friends who are part of the Checkmate fandon.
    (๑•ㅂ•)و✧

    shizu-chan July 17, 2021 6:00 pm

    I'm sorry I didn't understand the first part of your question. Are you asking what happened in chapter 26 and 27? Or is there a particular scene you didn't understand?

    I'll try to answer the questions you have:
    "would Eunsung have an interest or crush on Soohyun in the past?" - from the info we have currently is all implied - eunsung remembering soohyun wore glasses, when he tells his friend that he doesn't like reunions because he doesn't recognize any of those "bastards" faces, or remember anyone from school - but he remembered not only how soohyun looked like, but also mentions to his friend that "soohyun hasn't changed - he's still how he was in high school, just in a grown up suit (lit. Translation: whether he wears a high school uniform or a suit, there's no difference." (He says this affectionately btw - and to quote him "soohyun is hard to figure out (complex), and a sensitive guy." ) so the theory in the fandoms he really did pay attention to him, when soohyun wasn't looking at him. Soohyun thinks their relationship was the kind where if eunsung didn't look at him, their eyes would never meet (I.e. he was in a position of power due to his popularity) but he obviously noticed him a lot many times hehehehe.


    2."in the present, is he interested in maintaining or advancing his current relationship with Soohyun, and protecting him from the rapist teacher and probably Soohyun himself?" - eunsung has said recently that "He needs to rebuild their relationship from the basic foundations to go anywhere in the future." He isn't satisfied with their current business-like relationship. The theory in the fandom is that soohyun and eunsung are fearing completely different things rn - soohyun thinks the faster he solves this munseop situation, he can start having complete control of eunsung like he wants - he hates any influence on eunsung's life that isn't his - but he's also afraid if he's not useful to eunsung then he'll find someone and replace him (he's also pissed at himself for getting used to eunsung's presence in his life as someone who he takes for granted for always following him) - however eunsung is getting anxious about once the munseop situation, their relationship would end for good. Since the deal in the beginning chapters for this munseop situation. That's why he's trying to shake soohyun up by breaking down his walls he's become SOOOO docile ahahaha he's super worried for him, but he knows how prideful soohyun is and how upset he got when he tried to protect him earlier, so he says "Ok if you want do it, I get it. You must know what you're doing, so I trust you. But please be careful/take care of yourself, and don't keep me in the dark about the risks you're taking." ;_;

    shizu-chan July 17, 2021 6:16 pm
    I ask you here or do I give you my hotmail?And they are questions above all, because I only read the bad translation, I made a small personal translation of chapter 26 and 27 before it came out, then I realized... NekoLoka

    3. "It makes me laugh that Eunsung is jealous of the reporter when his biggest rival is probably himself" you're so very very right. Excellent observation, friend. You're right about that. I think he's just insecure because he thinks soohyun really hates him for being who he is (despite his efforts to show him that they're similar) - eunsung actually does realize that he's kinda fighting a losing battle against his own perception. In the chapter 29 they butchered here, he does hold his face and say, "What kind of standards/critreas are you using to say who is what kind of person? How the hell are you looking at me, Soohyun-ah?"
    This is where he realizes the chasm between them that soohyun sees....he is very upset afterwards where he realizes no matter what he says, soohyun will always misinterpret it into eunsung looking down at him." Hahaha he says I'll have to read more books to know the right words that soohyun doesn't misunderstand in the future."

    4. "Why did Eunsung rape Soohyun in the beginning?" - the author hasn't addressed it because we haven't gotten that many eunsung's flashbacks or monologues. So I can only tell you my own theory: I think eunsung did have past affection for him, but I think he did that - which was so uncharacteristic of him - because he TRULY did not want soohyun to be involved in this munseop mess. He tried putting him down and sending him away but he followed him to the hotel persistently, and also remember that eunsung's friend saw soohyun's face and the fact that he's a reporter meeting soohyun in a hotel room - he did that kind of thing, thinking soohyun would truly hate him to the point of revulsion, but he instead showed up at his door the next day lol. He did try to send him away even after that but soohyun came to his house and he was in a truly helpless place and soohyun came to rescue just in time - in more than way to help with munseop situation.
    I hope the author shows us a flashback of eunsung's thoughts when he saw soohyun after so many years, when he was doing to him, and after he walked out of the hotel room his expression.

    shizu-chan July 17, 2021 6:23 pm
    I ask you here or do I give you my hotmail?And they are questions above all, because I only read the bad translation, I made a small personal translation of chapter 26 and 27 before it came out, then I realized... NekoLoka

    "Eunsug isn´t that of someone physically forcing someone to get what he wants (Although I can be wrong), besides that apart from the first time, he hasn´t forced Soohyun again." - you're right. He isn't. That's why soohyun couldn't himself understand why he did that to him. He even asks that to eunsung in the car after their deal is made in the earlier chapters, he rationalized that because he thought he learned sex from munseop (since he's just assuming munseop had sex with eunsung - he was his first time hahaha - and so he did the same to him) eunsung doesn't defend his actions or clarify anything back then, but only apologizes to him for ruining his first time haha.
    Sex between them has been transactional of information and favour, but this changes through the story - from non-consensual, to eunsung stops when soohyun tells him to (when they make a deal in his room), to sex in the hotel (which soohyun initiates btw) and eunsung doesn't have sex when soohyun falls asleep, and instead cleans him up and put him to bed, to the next time in the car which is also initiated by soohyun. Their reasons differed so much over time...each time they did it, their feelings were changing so rapidly. Especially eunsung. Soohyun can't see the changes completely but he is noticing~

    NekoLoka July 17, 2021 6:26 pm
    I'm sorry I didn't understand the first part of your question. Are you asking what happened in chapter 26 and 27? Or is there a particular scene you didn't understand? I'll try to answer the questions you have:... shizu-chan

    The chapters 26 and 27 were examples of my ability as a translator, which is not very good but even I could see that it is being poorly translated.
    And I'm glad I'm not the only one with these theories.
    And it frustrates me a lot, but a MUCH that they are doing a bad translation in probably one of the best psychological bl manwha that I have been lucky enough to be born in the same century as the author.
    I wish there was a discord to talk about these things or compare translations between fans or something.

    shizu-chan July 17, 2021 6:27 pm
    wow. i also want to know about that. also i'm agree with you that eunsung biggest rival is probably the high school version of him. with sohyun personality i doubt advancing their relationship would be easy. i ... Ann

    Hello, Ann. You said "and when their had sex in the car, eunsung had become more and more sweet toward sohyun." - it's true, but it's because of what happened earlier during the exhibition - soohyun saving him from the reporters, him being there when he was standing up to munseop, when he stopped him from getting attacked more/ punched more - despite threatening to punch his face only earlier hahaha - he really gave in and admitted his feelings completely back then. There is this scene when he's kissing soohyun's palm so affectionately and then soohyun pulls it back and turns to leave him, leaving him with his hand paused in the air and turning his back on him, but eunsung grabs him and pulls him back to him like he couldn't bear to see him turn his back on him... it's my most favourite scene in the whole manhwa. Even more than the car scenes hahaha the conversations they had in the bathroom were the best~~•

    shizu-chan July 17, 2021 6:30 pm
    The chapters 26 and 27 were examples of my ability as a translator, which is not very good but even I could see that it is being poorly translated.And I'm glad I'm not the only one with these theories.And it fr... NekoLoka

    There is a relatively big Korean fandom on twitter so we do have a lot of fun discussing theories for everything from the words, the colour changes in the backgrounds. This manhwa is REALLY so loved... it's really the best. I'm glad you like it so much despite the bad translations. ┗( T﹏T )┛

    NekoLoka July 17, 2021 6:35 pm
    3. "It makes me laugh that Eunsung is jealous of the reporter when his biggest rival is probably himself" you're so very very right. Excellent observation, friend. You're right about that. I think he's just ins... shizu-chan

    Basically, we still lack information and can only theorize while we wait for the next chapter.
    And I agree with your theory that Eunsung did it to push Soohyun away, but one thing I love about Soohyun is that he is unpredictable and he won't stop until he gets what he wants.
    Honestly, this is my theory, but it gives me the impression that currently Eunsung has a positive opinion (or romantic ; ) ) and respects Soohyun a lot (or at least doesn´t underestimate him), another thing is that Soohyun allows himself to accept it ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍.

    NekoLoka July 17, 2021 6:48 pm
    "Eunsug isn´t that of someone physically forcing someone to get what he wants (Although I can be wrong), besides that apart from the first time, he hasn´t forced Soohyun again." - you're right. He isn't. That... shizu-chan

    This is one of the reasons why I love this masterpiece.
    Sex here isn´t fanservice but communication (Hot communication ⁄(⁄ ⁄·⁄ω⁄·⁄ ⁄)⁄ ), and also a clue of their current state in their relationship and how it is evolving (And sweetening<3<3<3<3).
    I have already mentioned it before that normally I don´t like a rape in BL because they oversimplify it to love=rape, and there is no mental damage or consequences neither in the victim or rapist, but here it is different, there is a reason and consequences for everything, and accusing the work of "love=rape" mean that you don´t understand the author's message at all (In my opinion).
    I really love how each sexual scene is giving us a message of the evolution of their relationship, or rather they are more honest with their body than with their words(▰˘◡˘▰).

    NekoLoka July 17, 2021 6:49 pm
    Hello, Ann. You said "and when their had sex in the car, eunsung had become more and more sweet toward sohyun." - it's true, but it's because of what happened earlier during the exhibition - soohyun saving him ... shizu-chan

    Thanks for the info!
    I hadn´t realized certain details.
    Thank you very much<3

    NekoLoka July 17, 2021 6:53 pm
    There is a relatively big Korean fandom on twitter so we do have a lot of fun discussing theories for everything from the words, the colour changes in the backgrounds. This manhwa is REALLY so loved... it's rea... shizu-chan

    I am very envious of you! ┗( T﹏T )┛
    I don't understand Korea, so I could only depend on my google translator (As always).
    And even with bad translations covering up its full potential, you can still see that it is a masterpiece, in my opinionヾ(☆▽☆).
    The only ones who suffer are the fans, I wonder if Lehzim hates English fans XD.

    shizu-chan July 17, 2021 6:57 pm
    Basically, we still lack information and can only theorize while we wait for the next chapter.And I agree with your theory that Eunsung did it to push Soohyun away, but one thing I love about Soohyun is that he... NekoLoka

    "Eunsung has a positive opinion (or romantic ; ) ) and respects Soohyun a lot (or at least doesn´t underestimate him)" - positive, yes. He put in a word of trust to shinhae to trust soohyun and work with him without telling soohyun. He was worried he'd get mad at him again for interfering lol.
    In the Korean fandom, we actually talked about this: soohyun at the start said how he knew exactly who eunsung is (always misinterpreting his words of worry as him looking down on him) but in the recent chapter he said that eunsung is like a problem book that he can't seem to get even one answer right - and he can't do it on his own. He can't understand him at all, and realizes that only eunsung himself can tell him about who he is - and he's someone who is very patient teacher and will tell him who he is step by step.
    Eunsung on the other hand though he knows who soohyun is, but he knows him only surface-level deep, and wishes to know him from the ground-up, like to his core or something. Soohyun surprises eunsung a lot, like he ALWAYS surpasses his expectations, and also he is pleasantly surprised to find how perfectly soohyun fits into his life - kind of. But the parts of him that intrigued him before, which he found fun before, now make him worry, since his feelings have deepened considerably.
    Hopefully they'll communicate in the future chapters....eunsung-ah, keep fighting! The road is long, but soohyun will realize soon hopefully. Eunsung just needs to be really straightforward (which has started being already)

    shizu-chan July 17, 2021 7:05 pm
    This is one of the reasons why I love this masterpiece.Sex here isn´t fanservice but communication (Hot communication ⁄(⁄ ⁄·⁄ω⁄·⁄ ⁄)⁄ ), and also a clue of their current state in their rela... NekoLoka

    Yes, soohyun isn't actually very full of sexual desires (?) Like he doesn't have a high sex drive, so for him, it's not about anything but using it as a tool to defile eunsung (that's what he says but you know...)
    Also one more thing, I saw people complaining that soohyun hasn't topped eunsung despite threatening him all the time,
    Actually he doesn't have an intention of doing eunsung, but rather having sex is so disgusting to him, but he enjoys seeing the desperate and vulnerable look on eunsung's face, and also to him, it is another way of controlling eunsung by having munseop's dirty memories of filthy sex be overridden (?) By the times they had sex together.
    To him, just the act of having sex is disgusting, but with eunsung is different. The car scene was definitely where his whole perception changed, since he was enjoying it more when he was looking down at eunsung and also he rode him on his own haha.
    Moreover, in the bathroom stall, is where he didn't push eunsung away but instead let him do what he did. And took him to the car afterwards to have sex even though eunsung was kinda surprised hahaha

    NekoLoka July 17, 2021 9:53 pm
    "Eunsung has a positive opinion (or romantic ; ) ) and respects Soohyun a lot (or at least doesn´t underestimate him)" - positive, yes. He put in a word of trust to shinhae to trust soohyun and work with him w... shizu-chan

    I'm glad to know that your relationship is continually evolving<3<3<3<3.
    I wonder how many seasons this manwa will have, and I hope it doesn't end when the rapist professor is defeated, as they will have to adapt their relationship without an excuse.
    It makes me laugh that the rapist professor is being used as an excuse for these two to get to know each other better XD (But considering that there are people suffering at his hand, I really hope they can stop him and save the others).