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Faevae July 16, 2023 11:01 pm

So much build up and so much emotions in the first chapters that the ending felt a little rushed. Like the idea behind the conflict resolution is there and i get it but the execution felt a bit sloppy. like years of emotional turmoil and anguish just for it to get resolved in one chapter? Idk it didn’t feel authentic

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    Kim dokja's side bitch July 17, 2023 2:32 pm

    Same feelings, i get it, and it's not bad per se but it felt like they rushed a lot of things in the last ch.

    Faevae July 17, 2023 6:42 pm
    Same feelings, i get it, and it's not bad per se but it felt like they rushed a lot of things in the last ch. Kim dokja's side bitch

    Yeah, like, it’s definitely not bad, the setting & conflict were well executed. it just felt a little lackluster because everything was set around misaki’s lack of confidence, jealousy and insecurities, so we’ve been waiting for him to overcome them but it wasn’t even shown, just a passing comment about him playing video games all night and that fixed everything apparently. It’s just a shame because it could’ve been more

    Kim dokja's side bitch July 17, 2023 10:57 pm
    Yeah, like, it’s definitely not bad, the setting & conflict were well executed. it just felt a little lackluster because everything was set around misaki’s lack of confidence, jealousy and insecurities,... Faevae

    Not to mention we didn't see much development from kaname's side, i understand his feelings are strong and all but i wanted to see him put up more fight or at least do the whole "you don't know the value of something until you lose it" it's like he was only waiting for misaki to pick himself up whenever so that they could be together, but well, it's a good read.

    Beka July 17, 2023 11:47 pm
    Yeah, like, it’s definitely not bad, the setting & conflict were well executed. it just felt a little lackluster because everything was set around misaki’s lack of confidence, jealousy and insecurities,... Faevae

    I also felt that , Misaki is supposed to hate Kaname and he is also straight, still, by the second chapter he is ready to make out and eventually have sex with him like nothing?? It should't be so easy xd, I like the conflict, I think it was really interesting but the development for them to reach that point felt weird.