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Ch 76 kinda disappointed

moon September 10, 2023 7:17 am

1. I was liking the story quite so far but I’m kinda getting annoyed by the Mary Sue vibes from the MC, or plot armor or whatever. I get that he’s OP but why is he supposedly good at literally everything? And yeah he’s MC but the everything that’s happening keeps revolving around him. All attention and eyes are on him. As readers, yes we are technically revolving around him, but revolving him as a world build up? it’s so bland. Like he’s the only one that seems to have any good ideas, or good at choosing morally ‘correct’ decisions. We’ve been introduced to quite a few characters that are supposedly smart or have certain skills and traits that was supposed to stand out but it literally gets washed away. Like yeah there’s some incentives or goals here and there (from supposedly important characters) but they’ve mostly been reduced to chasing after him or somehow these goals ends up leading to him? (Main characters being the red girl and the blond guy)

2. I quite like OP characters if they’re created good but so far the MC still doesn’t feel familiar?? I feel like idk them? Like the characters aren’t really feeling fleshed out and has actual personalities but are just here to progress a story. Even the blond guys character traits (like being a team leader, choosing to help others because he was too late to save his own family, etc) have been removed and given to the MC even though the story keeps reminding us that he doesn’t care to take help others or plays in a team. It feels like they just reduced him to someone who’s power hungry just so it can paint a better light for the MC. Which I think is a waste because the rest of the characters are already all in the background. And the one other focus (other than MCs friends, which is not a lot) is just there to have a one sided rivalry….I don’t feel a strong connection to any of these characters.

Probably gonna drop this, maybe pick it up when I’m bored but ig this isn’t really for me.

Responses
    moon September 10, 2023 7:28 am

    I acc really wanted to like this☹, the story and the rest of the world building is so good but the character building just isn’t doing it for me.

    Yanixi September 13, 2023 8:20 pm

    Yea I agree I hate what they are doing with the blonde guy, I thought once they gave him his awakening it would be a bit more to him and the union but it just doesn’t seem like it I hope they won’t make them fight each other I don’t won’t him to just be a background character either I also would like for jisoo and the other friend to do more and have more to their skills like ik his friend is a 1 star priest he healed her like once and that was the end of it I wanna see something I feel like he hasn’t really lvled up much or gained any real skill at all other then the 10 secs protection bubble which they kinda joke about like “hey remember ur not a tank” uk

    Erys February 6, 2024 11:31 pm

    I agree when it comes to the MC very much, so because it made it seem like the freaking name of the story was a very needed integral part of it, and they even said it was like solo and it was like no no you need a back up system you need people it doesn’t work like that you’re not actually soloing anything you make it quite clear that it’s actually not so I agree that is changing things in a way that don’t seem particularly necessary, including the blonde. I feel like he directly would’ve gone ahead and gone the third path as well. It seems irrational to a certain degree that he would’ve picked the Angel party. Like loosely, I understand, but like him, not giving it enough thought to being like yeah this is not a good idea. It seems weird. They’re showing him or somebody that’s not actually playing in the game but instead of viewing the game and then moving his character while everybody else is stuck in the game and just like any other MPC playing the game feels a little off. It is very good but at the same time it’s a little bit off