i mean with 2 chapters it's not really any solid length to build up anything at all but it felt really lacking in depth. or more like on character setting. or Something. i don't know.
i felt that the girlfriend is unnecessarily put in. (from the pov that the author wanted to make this bl) he went to us with "thinking of marriage w/ her" to having it crush down for who knows why? (yes we all know for who nd why but we would have survived it not happening for a better telling lol) but she got left crying and hurt and stuff lol. not gonna comment on the after meet up.
gf best character idc she too good for him it's good she saw it early on like, he weird asf
it also didn't feel natural on how they got into each other, so that's kinda sad. one sec he's gushing over marrying his girlfriend, the other sec they eating each other up. the flow was, unfortunately, very messy.
i mean with 2 chapters it's not really any solid length to build up anything at all but it felt really lacking in depth. or more like on character setting. or Something. i don't know.
i felt that the girlfriend is unnecessarily put in. (from the pov that the author wanted to make this bl) he went to us with "thinking of marriage w/ her" to having it crush down for who knows why? (yes we all know for who nd why but we would have survived it not happening for a better telling lol) but she got left crying and hurt and stuff lol. not gonna comment on the after meet up.
gf best character idc she too good for him it's good she saw it early on like, he weird asf
it also didn't feel natural on how they got into each other, so that's kinda sad. one sec he's gushing over marrying his girlfriend, the other sec they eating each other up. the flow was, unfortunately, very messy.