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You summed it up perfectly
Can just agree ... I loved that the author included many bdsm things like the piss and the rope ... and basic things like the safe word... I also agree that they should have brought more character development for the top but I still liked it a lot
I'm confused why a bunch of you chose to read it if you're scared of bdsm, it was obvious from the start so I just don't get why people are all freaked out over some piss play lmaoo,
anyway this was pretty good, basically the first time I see a top piss inside (on purpose, not rape, and not squirt) so that was pretty cool, didn't love how some conflicts were done or resolved, ending was kinda rushed? Or just out of character actually, they didn't elaborate on the tops situation with emotions, felt like they just called him a psychopath and were like "yup, anyway"