But like, why did it go so fast in the last chapters? Honestly sometimes the pace is slow in some stories, but I’d say here it was WAY too fast, Blanche dealt with all the problems too quickly and the reader is left with no time to breathe at all. The pace was okay in the beginning but it kept getting more and more rushed as the chapters kept going. Chapter 100 seems to be the end, but Riccardo character is kinda … meek. Like it’s hard to have a real attachment to him, as his relationship with Blanche kinda feel bully like, and it’s surprising that she does end up liking him. The moment where his memories were reset to the original villain character got me crazy cause I almost thought we wouldn’t have an explanation as to would he get his memories back or not, thank god we have like five pages about this at the very end /s But also yes, the whole plot with Anastasia gets rushed WAY TOO MUCH, and she then becomes a character in redemption with a bit too much proximity to Blanche when it should have been properly developed I feel? Also, Pierre became the villain and Mariette and Alphonso are … okayish in the end? It’s a lot to take and a lot that just get thrown in your face when you’re reading, it feels like the author wanted to deal with all the characters they had left on the side and brought them back to make them villain and finish the plot fast. So yeah, in general it was so promising but it should have been longer and more developed, where is the depth of the characters? Despite all I guess the scenario was original and Blanche’s behavior was interesting, but honestly a lot of potential feels wasted?
But like, why did it go so fast in the last chapters? Honestly sometimes the pace is slow in some stories, but I’d say here it was WAY too fast, Blanche dealt with all the problems too quickly and the reader is left with no time to breathe at all. The pace was okay in the beginning but it kept getting more and more rushed as the chapters kept going. Chapter 100 seems to be the end, but Riccardo character is kinda … meek. Like it’s hard to have a real attachment to him, as his relationship with Blanche kinda feel bully like, and it’s surprising that she does end up liking him. The moment where his memories were reset to the original villain character got me crazy cause I almost thought we wouldn’t have an explanation as to would he get his memories back or not, thank god we have like five pages about this at the very end /s
But also yes, the whole plot with Anastasia gets rushed WAY TOO MUCH, and she then becomes a character in redemption with a bit too much proximity to Blanche when it should have been properly developed I feel? Also, Pierre became the villain and Mariette and Alphonso are … okayish in the end? It’s a lot to take and a lot that just get thrown in your face when you’re reading, it feels like the author wanted to deal with all the characters they had left on the side and brought them back to make them villain and finish the plot fast. So yeah, in general it was so promising but it should have been longer and more developed, where is the depth of the characters?
Despite all I guess the scenario was original and Blanche’s behavior was interesting, but honestly a lot of potential feels wasted?