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I forgot to add it but wow was I the only one surprised at Freddie’s death? Like, it was pretty sad. I really thought she would find a solution in the end with her powers opening or something so I was really surprised. I think it’s a bit dulled by the ending, but that was pretty harsh in the story!
The story is really nice, the drawings are amazing, but the story feels shortened to me. There are a few things missing, and I think a few more chapters would’ve been nice to conclude it all at least? Tell us about Ina for example? I feel like this story had the potential to be a 100 chapters at least but instead it seems too quick. The ending and dealing with the villain also goes by too fast. A bit of a shame. But still a good story nonetheless