We're hit in the face with fluff for the first 10 chapters. Just as I got settled into a historical fluff piece, the story changes into a political one? And then suddenly all strategic decisions are placed in MC's hands? What?! Our MC is a literal newbie! An educated newbie, but a newbie--something the story even reinforced earlier! I'll admit that our MC has potential to be more--but it's too much too soon. Apparently it's only 34 chapters, so why was there so much mindless fluff for the first 10 chapters...?
We're hit in the face with fluff for the first 10 chapters. Just as I got settled into a historical fluff piece, the story changes into a political one? And then suddenly all strategic decisions are placed in MC's hands? What?! Our MC is a literal newbie! An educated newbie, but a newbie--something the story even reinforced earlier! I'll admit that our MC has potential to be more--but it's too much too soon. Apparently it's only 34 chapters, so why was there so much mindless fluff for the first 10 chapters...?