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The story is interesting and the art is good but I don't know why,it always feels like it ...

Sofia April 3, 2024 5:00 pm

The story is interesting and the art is good but I don't know why,it always feels like it lacks something.Emotion.Pathos.They look angry but I don't feel it.There's no momentum,it doesn't look or feel realistic.Even their love scenes,I don't feel the love,the lust.And that's saying much considering this is one of the more explicit smut mangas out there,uncensored and all

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    Lucci April 3, 2024 6:29 pm

    You put into words what I've always felt too! There's always somthing missing, maybe because evertything happens quite abruptly, there's no buildup whatsoever, no slow "empty" moments, no subtle expressions etc

    Sofia April 3, 2024 7:10 pm
    You put into words what I've always felt too! There's always somthing missing, maybe because evertything happens quite abruptly, there's no buildup whatsoever, no slow "empty" moments, no subtle expressions etc Lucci

    Yes! Especially their facial expressions and body language.They go from

    C.... April 4, 2024 1:22 am

    tbh the art is good but i think the artist might just be stuck in that awkward art phase where their art is really good but isn’t as fluid so the motions and expressions look off. like us seeing wren go from couch to on the floor in a begging pose killed me because it just looks really stiff

    Sofia April 4, 2024 11:47 am
    tbh the art is good but i think the artist might just be stuck in that awkward art phase where their art is really good but isn’t as fluid so the motions and expressions look off. like us seeing wren go from... C....

    YES!I didn't know how to explain it but that's exactly it