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The tonal whiplash is off putting

AngelDrool April 11, 2024 4:36 pm

This is just not my kind of comic. No hate to those who like it but I can’t handle the tone switches from cutesy romcom to psychological grooming pedo brother. I certainly don’t think this is written well enough where it transitions smoothly between topics. Most times the abuse from the brother seems as if it’s written just to cause a reaction from the male lead. As if the only reason the author wrote all this trauma for the MC was so the male lead can hear it and protect the love interest. Making the abusive plot meaningless for me.

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    ram April 12, 2024 6:34 am

    thank u, exactly my thoughts