Sorry, guys! During system maintenance, some functions like comment are unavailable.

basically, read this under 4 hours

zenko May 12, 2024 9:07 am

theres so much potential to extend the story and explore more of it. the soul switch? the little brother and mason suddenly not caring about him anymore after afghanistan? additionally, the entire afghanistan experience for mason and how he got into mercenary work and how he’s so skilled? the entire satanic ritual hayley had? all of hayley’s ex scandals, drug addiction, and lovers? hayley’s old movies and childhood? mason’s coffee shop? we never got to see hayley meet noah’s parents too, i think, i kinda breezed through it because everything went by so quickly and smoothly. there should’ve been more plot with the stalker, mason’s background about afghanistan, his brother, how he got into mercenary work, noah’s relationship with his parents and how it lead him to be so dependent on mason, and how hayley became so corrupt as a innocent child actor and probably about how corrupt the movie industry is

Responses