this story feels very.. blonky. to jump to 9 yrs to the future on the second damn chapter is honestly wild. i do know it happens in other stories and stuff but the way everything is going on feels so weird. the pace is very fast with things. it almost doesn't really make sense as to why something goes a certain way but well, i could only get to chapter 23 for now.. but to have me force myself to read this, that's robbing the fun out of it tbh. maybe i'll finish this some other time
this story feels very.. blonky. to jump to 9 yrs to the future on the second damn chapter is honestly wild. i do know it happens in other stories and stuff but the way everything is going on feels so weird. the pace is very fast with things. it almost doesn't really make sense as to why something goes a certain way but well, i could only get to chapter 23 for now..
but to have me force myself to read this, that's robbing the fun out of it tbh. maybe i'll finish this some other time